wow i felt like it was me the one writting the poem ;)

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u know i luv ya chica! keep ya head up!

Good Poem..i think ppl wont have a hard time relating to it! good job..if u ever get a chance look at mine..thx

Hey,
I understand completely,
I hate it when people know that your depressed and only then do they try and help you.. If only they realised how long it has been going on for, if only they understood whats going through your mind.. if they could just one day wake up and see the world how you see it... i dont think people can comprehend what we go through.. so i know how you feel.. believing you can make it alone.. well i made it, and theres only one reason why... because the people that loved me proved it and i finally realised that there is a reason for me to live... i hope you find your reason, because you sound like a great person.. keep your head up...
I'm here for a chat.. if you want...
xoxox
Hollow Mind

Good poems,keep up your writing! (comment back plz!)

I can very much relate. I hate when ur upset and you have like everyone you know asking whats wrong. You might want to work on the poem a bit though. It doesnt have a very nice flow. But its a really good start. With a little work it could become even better

Thank you very much...but your is equally awesome..i know exactly where your comming from with that..like the same exact thing is going on with me

Thank you!..alot of people say that...but you all have like awards and have won contests..and i dont have any of that...i wish i did..is there something you have to do to enter your poems?

I like this poem a lot. it duznt rhyme but it still works bcuz its so .... heartfelt. thats the sign of a gd, no a gr8, poem

p.s plz comment on sum o mine

xXx