im not sure what to say
this was a really good poem

love andrea xxxx

\/\/()\/\/ tHiS wAs ToTaLly KoOlIeS!
5/5
kEeP uP tHe Gr8 WoRk!
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yer woah, its great ...!!!
really good!!

Love Sam xox

bravo gd poem lol

Great poem. I loved it. you're really talented.
wish you the best,
marjan

Wow, this is great!
I can actually say I never read a poem like it :D
One thing that would make the flow more great would be to change this line a little
"And fall to the floor once more"
The floor then more then door is to much oor lol, maybe try "And fall to the ground once more"

Just a option your the poet its up to you :D

great write :D

xoOox