Good poem...... a little eerie but it's still good and made some sense! lol! Keep writing

Very intense and dark just how I like them! Creative and unique I love your style! I look forward to reading more dark poems by you! Take Care! Brooke~

Original and unique! I loved it!

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Awesomness. i would love to play the role of the slave in that, so deep with emotion. So intense. Very good.

-Jennifer.

Funny theme-a puppet...

the tense was a bit twisted,look at these lines..

Come my little friend
and
You start to scream

from inbetween these two lines,the tense throws me off...it feels like at first, you are talking to me,then you are telling me what I did...quite confusiing.

*Runs and hugs you* It made me laugh, and yet filled me with sorrow... I don't know why, but I really liked this. The little puppet seemed to be so much more than just a few words...*Shrugs* I'm not sure if that makes sense to you. I really loved this one. One of your top ones in my opinion....ignore others who rated this less than a 5!

Love,
DarkSuicide

I loved the words and the meanig behind them but the flow kept changing throughout the poem. maybe u wanted to do that. i dono. it was a good poem overall though.

Neat idea lol. Reminds me of a poem my friends wrote. Some parts didn't flow as well and I would tell you which parts but im in a hurry. Good poem though!

Wow... thats creepy! lol, but pretty well written. good job. I'm not sure in all the parts if I know what ur trying to get across which is not a bad thing... lets the reader's mind wonder which is a good thing! so again good job!

Super poem, dark and intence...and slightly creepy. super job

Another interesting, very dark poem.... which i loved once again !!!
5/5

xxx cici xxx

Nice work, though it is quite different from your other poems, for those like me who admire versatility, it's another enjoyable read.