As I Sleep

by Renee   Aug 13, 2005


Surrounding myself
in bloodred sheets of oblivion
I sleep.
And I dream of you.
and it hurts so bad,
to the point that I never close my eyes,
because seeing your reflection in my eyelids,
It replays until the tears force me awake
gasping for air in my lungs...
or just love in my heart.

-*- I know its short. not that good either. And I couldn't think of a good title.-*-

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  • 19 years ago

    by rachel

    hey this is good enough that length reli dusnt matter, well written, emotional and powerful 5/5 xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I like the twist :)

    the poem is short but deep..

    a well enjoyed read!

    x)

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Length never matters dear, and this...this is AMAZING. It's SO powerful. <3 A nice little twist that is very effective. =) Great work. I love you doll, always here for you. <3 xoxox

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCareHunxx

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