CrAShed AND seVerED

by SEAN   Aug 13, 2005


The clouds cover up the sun
and my words are painted in Grey
from this day what could we ever become
what a waste of time inside a rare day

the clock tower speaks to me backwoods
as i look into what weave done
from when our eyes met to when our hearts fell dead
we cant live from what we adored

my blood still boils but that desire is somewhat archaic
sex means nothing when were both incapable
my hand clenches soil instead of your hand
as i watch you from behind as we crash
and its the lights of that car that greet me when i wake
instead of the warmth of your eyes

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  • 18 years ago

    by Macabre

    As always interesting and raw. You have this rough style, not beauty or grace but something still attractive about what you write. I love it.

  • Thnx for ur comment but i think your poem is way well written than mine, nice way to describe the grief.

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Hiya, I really enjoyed reading this. I read it a few times to try and get the meaning of it, I find it really deep. Well done and take care
    - Polly x

  • Hey this is great u should make a sequel 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Aye reli enjoyed dis....love dia mwaz xoxo