by erely Aug 13, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
At last I'm free and I can see |
by Tom Swart
It is obvious that your words provide the nutrients for a poets pen like the sky provides the blue for the clouds. . I enjoyed your poem and the thoughts that came to visit the page before me. Keep up the good writes I look forward to reading more of your works. Peace. |
I don't know what drew me to your poems, but this was the first thing I read.My god, I so needed to read this, to hear this(read my last piece'The Last Good-bye and also 'All That Matters At This Moment' and 'Where are You?' and you'll understand why).This is beautifully written, what you expressed made me sad, but somewhat comforted, and realizing how true your insight is, and though it's going to take time, reading this made me feel a bit better.Thank you.Truly , thank you. |
Great poem well done, thank you very much for your comments on poems they were greatly appreciated, take care, |
by Pilar
Loved it. |
Bravo, bravo, well done!!! A strong voice and poem, as well!!! |