awsome write

thanks so much for r/c on my poem

do u really live in isreal?
my mom lived there for i while I'm going there in a couple summers to visit her old friends

love always

Natalie

excellent job on this one! keep it up!

Excellent poem. keep it up can't wait to read your other 3

Again this was a very good poem, I loved it it was so sad and about love, you really expressed your feelings well done :D

"I lost best friend"

This would be better like this "I lost a best friend" or "I lost my best friend"

well done :D

Great poem.. I can feel a lot of emotion and sadness. Excellent.

Tiffany.xox.

Very good poem.. I voted a 5!1 hugs

Dat is really sad!