LoveGone?

by Tine   Aug 13, 2005


When roses die,
when people cry,
when my thougts weigh a ton
when houses have collapsed,
when my pillows are cried on,
when i wish i was dead,
when i don't look in the mirror, because a sad face is staring at me...

is that the day that you'll be gone?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Free Spirit

    Hey this is a really nice poem, because, seriously if the one you want leaves you it's like hell, and all what you expressed in your poem is what mostly happens or feels like or resembles, lol so yea really nice poem keep it up! and plz if its ok could you plz check out my new poem "Just Missing You" I'll appreciate it a lot, because this poem was written truly in a very gloomy moment. AnYwAyZ! ttyl Peace = )

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