I like this one. Very well written. Intense as to where you need to read the next line. Thats what makes it awesome. Good job Lad!

-Jennifer.

Hey i like this poem, well done, it was interesting and well written.

Thanks for your comments on my poems, y'know i appreciate them !!!!!!

<3 Charli XxXxXxXxX

Very deep and heart broken, its very well writen good job, keep it up!

That was great! really liked it...
hope you're ok about the situation...it will get better...
take care x x x