You got that right about love at first sight,,,when i saw my girl it was definitely love at first sight!ANYWAYZ tht is a great poem and thu ur young ur damn talented!hope it grows as you do!good luck and good job

U're so L.u.C.k.Y.!!!
I love the poem, keep writing

Hmm, well for me my love at first sight was great but ended bad. i guess i'm just bad luck. good poem, like always