Thats so sweet!

I love the idea!

and the flow was great..great job :0)

lisa x)

Put this together right, it would make for an awesome song. Great poem.

awww.. that almost made me cry.. it reminded me of my best frend and her boyfriend..i thot this poem was so cute and heart-felt.. and most of all, it is soo true (tho i dun reli noe that).. ur rhyme was gr8 and ur words even gr8er.. this is so worth sharing, and my 5!!
take care
nouna