Wall of Stone

by kat   Aug 14, 2005


Let go of the reason,
make me understand.
Give me something to believe in,
prove that you're a man.
All of those feelings
you keep bottled up inside.
What are you afraid of?
What is there to hide?
You tell me you trust me,
but there's so much you won't show.
You tell me that you love me,
and that you'd be lost if i chose to go.
You think theres a wall of stone,
built up around your heart,
just cuz you're afraid of being hurt,
or maybe torn apart.
You tell me i can build a door,
and that you'll see me through,
i cant seem to build it,
but so much of me is you.
I'm not strong enough to walk away,
I don't expect to hear you begging me to stay.
Take down the walls,
or open the door up if you must.
But when you tell me that you love me,
promise me your trust.

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  • 19 years ago

    by NannO

    aww.. that was so nice.. i loved ur rhyme and ur last stanza just said so much.. keep goin.. this is gr8
    love
    nonz

  • 19 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    great job. it's very hard to get someone to take dow the walls! don't give up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    great job. it's very hard to get someone to take dow the walls! don't give up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Ixora

    this is a wonderful poem- i cant think of any really good titles but maybe something along the lines of "Decietful Wall" or "Trust Untrusted" lol ya they may sound bad im not in my writing mood now but its a beautiful poem and i can relate - except thats both of us not just him- doesnt help really but hey- thank u for ur comment and i understand why ud think its weird to like it - i did too lol ... ok well keep it up..
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