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by Emotionless Riot   Aug 14, 2005


It was working out fine
Too good to be true
You came into my life
And away my heart flew

Off into the sky
To dance with the stars
From planet to planet
Earth, Moon and Mars

You were my everything,
My heart and my soul,
You knew just what to say,
You were brave and bold,

But then one fatal day,
my life came to a stop,
when i heard from a friend,
I stopped and said, "WHAT?!"

There's no cure for this one,
Knowing I was not good enough,
What made you think,
you could do all that stuff?

You don't understand
The pain of it all,
When there's another man or woman
You just fall and fall...

My heart is breaking,
tears roll down my eyes,
i clutch my stomach,
I feel for SURE i'm going to die,

The tears came down fast,
Saliva drips from my lips,
The lips YOU used to kiss,
The heart YOU used to flip

They say, "the hearts do mend"
But not for me
This ripping hard pain
Will last for iternity

I cannot breathe
I've lost all sight
I never want to see anyone again
And live for the night

Under the covers i crawl
This feelings here for good
I wish, wish, wish, wish
That i understood

I gave you everything
I sold my heart and my soul
To please you forever
I am bruised forever, 100% fold

My throat is raw
My head is throbbing
I cannot stop crying
Though my heart is stopping

What oh what did i do?
What DIDN'T i do?
To make you feel satisfied
I did love you, too.

But she is more...there
More pretty and smart
Did you ever consider
My heart for a start?

You obviously didn't
Because i'm lying here dieing
And to think it kills me
That YOU'RE not even crying

No, as i lie here and pass
And feel all is dead
It KILLS me to think
Not a tear you have shed

When my tear ducts have used
All that they have been made to use
Yet i'm still crying rivers
Because i just seem to lose

It will never get better
No matter what they say
And i will never be able
To face another day

So i lie here and think
Of exactly you
And no matter how i brainstorm
I don't know what to do

Then the doorbell rings
And i'm thinking "who?"
I hear a familiar voice,
Oh my god,
It's you.

P.S
Please comment. I DID WRITE THIS!! I do write a lot of poems, and it's cool i get to submit them. This is the second poem i've submitted here, but i had to delete the other one because i didn't write it.

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  • 19 years ago

    by nicola

    thanks fr the tip on my poem.

    this poem is great.you said you writes lots of poems why don' you submit them

    keep up the good work hun xx

  • Hey, thanks for commenting on my poem 'concrete rose' i appreciate it.

    I like this poem, it's long but it still flows really well.

    Good Job.

    <3 Charli XxX

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