Tears in the Rain

by Harlequin[let me put you to sleep]   Aug 14, 2005


Tears in the rain
Tears of the sun
Falling apart my heart is slain
No longer my life is fun

Blood in the river
Blood of the dead
In the cold my flesh will shiver
Is this where my soul has been led?

Pain in my heart
Pain of the used
Hurting and torn apart
Labeled a liar, criticized and accused

Failed as a woman
Failed as a girl
I say what I want, and not what I can
And then I watch everything decay in a whirl

Scars on my body
Scars of my past
I see how many memories are gotty
But then they disappear so damn fast

Shadows on my wall
Shadows in my life
Each darkness would love to see me fall
And each fall causes such a hell of a strife

Fears in my mind
Fears in the night
Sometimes I cry myself blind
Cause I only want to stop this fright

Cries from my soul
Cries from the child in me
I am empty; empty is the hole in me
But it’s invisible to all who see

Breaks in my eyes
Breaks in the days
Its what lingers in my cries?
And what causes my life so many delays

Lonely and sad
Lonely, left to tackle a fray
Its what went bad?
It’s when you left and didn’t stay

please rate and comment, i would appreciate it
thanx
-harley-

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  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Tears I cry
    Blood I shed
    Pain I feel
    Failure I am
    Scars I have
    Shadows I'm afraid
    Fears of mine
    Cry to make it go away
    Broken I am
    Lonely I will be
    For no one's there waiting for me

    Just thought it will be nice to use the words from every first word from the first line of the sentences of your poem. Anyway that's what i feel, Nice poem. 5/5.

  • 19 years ago

    by lindsey

    Harley i love this one..awesome job...it was really good..i mean your feelings were just so real..hope your doin ok..if u ever need 2 talk email at lilfoxxy072002@yahoo.com...

  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    I can totally relate, I love this poem keep it up

    Jenn

  • 19 years ago

    by lindsey

    wow great writing.. i love reading your work..Sorry i havnt been readin them like it dont tell me when ppl got new work..But i guess i'll just have 2 check 4 myself..great write i loved it..stay strong..<3 lindsey

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