Hi Simon,your sensitivity to someone else's feeling shines through,I know you feel her pain...great writing

Such a strong write ! 5/5 for a wonderful theme and a great way of finding the right words. This made me think about what is behind and moved me a lot ... it's my favourite poem by you, because it describes a feeling well know for me , I can't even find the words to express how much I love this poem, because it's simply brilliantly written .

Keep up writing poetry from the heart
Lots of love
Sabine

Aww, that was very sweet Simon. A very nice write indeed. I really like the poem you have dedicated to people, they are very good.