Lost love

by TJ Bake   Nov 14, 2003


My heart is broke
My soul is lost
I loved so much
But now it's gone

Love is so crazy
Oh yes it is
But once you have it
You never want it to end

Once it's taken
It won't come back
So love while you can
Before you lose your chance

If you ever find
That one true love
Don't make the mistake
And just let it go

Love can be a friend
Love can be a foe
It's all up to you
Just never let it go

plz rate this and give me advice on my good and bad points in this poem, it's one of the first i've ever written, so by this it'll tell me to pursue in poetry or let it die out. thank you

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