That was beautifully done. Your words created some really great imagery and it flowed well. Keep up the good work and take care.
><> Kiesha

Wow really written emotional sad poem! You could feel love and also so much hurt. It happens to the best of us why I will never know! Good write I can relate. Brooke~

This was a very good poem. It started out so gentile, and then turns, and then becomes really sad. It's like a tragic ending to Shakespeare's play Romeo and Juliet. Thanks for the read hun, I hope you're doing fine.

Ooooh, pretty. Always nice to see talent, so few people have it : )

♥Niki

Why is this only a 4.0!??! this was very good! a differnt point of view, and well, you gave me an idea for a poem! lol thanks, and it was great i mean the rhyming the flowing, and a suggestion, break it into stanzas, great job! 5/5

Oh wow! I wanted to read some of your poems because I've read some things you've said in forums and thought they were really interesting, I'm so glad I did! Wow I mean I am so shocked!! This poem left me with my mouth open in awe thats how much I loved it! Those last lines closed your poem out great! You def. get a five from me!
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

Hey can u add me?thanx for the comment about rape

Wow nice poem, i like the idea. keep it up and dont stop writing!

At first I thought this would be full of cliches, but I was wrong. Well worth the read. Great poem
Sarahx

Wow, this poem was sooo emotional!!!!!! it was sooooo good too!!!!!!!! 5/5 definatly!!!!!

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