Comments : INNOCENCE

  • 19 years ago

    by Kimeko Lancaster

    good poem!!

  • 19 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    Thats sweet nice work maybe last line shud be small child torn away,
    Torn away to what they wanted of her
    I dunno soz xxx Great job! xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    Great job! very nice!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lenny

    I think its a good poem but i cant understand it thru the typos....

  • 19 years ago

    by Phong

    Wow this is a 5...meaning is great...great great one

  • 19 years ago

    by Katie

    Good from what ur feeling thats what i write from what im feeling

  • 19 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, great poem. 5/5 great expression.

    ~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~