by M MEM Aug 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
This is another part of my trail poems, id appreciate it if you checked them out. |
Excellent! You broke a lot of sentances, but in this case it's ok, I love the uniquiness in this poem, great job! 5/5 |
Another lovely piece from your little trail series. Nicely done, again. |
by Lenny
Wow that was gorgeous its a great poem idea and you can relate alot of things to a trail like you did |
by nikki
This poem is my fav. (not saying i dont like the others) but this one is a 5/5 to keep up the good work your a very talented writer good job. |
really good poem, keep it up your awesome. |