Comments : How I Feel Inside

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Hey, good poem, I really ike it. It flows well and the format is Okay, the words you chose were pretty good.

    But I think if you add this:

    I'm sorry I'm not what you wanted
    I'm sorry I cant be like you
    I'm sorry I cant be perfect
    I'm sorry you cant help me through

    At the end for the ending (duh..lol)

    Then it will be better.

    good job, keep up the good work.