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by The Wingless
Hey, good poem, I really ike it. It flows well and the format is Okay, the words you chose were pretty good. But I think if you add this: I'm sorry I'm not what you wanted I'm sorry I cant be like you I'm sorry I cant be perfect I'm sorry you cant help me throughAt the end for the ending (duh..lol) Then it will be better. good job, keep up the good work.