by Broke&Lost
I liked it though. I admit it was strange but really good. For a poem that just flowed out it was written very nicely and the words were just there and they made perfect sense. good job. |
by Tiffany
It was amazing! Its much better than |
by Lisa
I think this poem is amazing and definatly unique. Keep up the awesome poems. |
by morbid_tears
Hey, I really love this poem, very descriptive, my friend here said that she likes it also. Never EVER stop writing. You have beautiful writing. And I love to read it!! Keep up the good work! =-D |
by Eyes_Of_Rain
Strange? No way!! It's absolutely exquisite. I love it. The rhyming scheme is great, the flow is wonderful, and the message it sends out is awesome. I can relate to this one also, as I currently have 9 tattoos. They do help with stress, and the needles steady and deep rhythm help ease emotional turmoil and pain. |