Comments : My Permanent Piece Of Art

  • 19 years ago

    by Broke&Lost

    I liked it though. I admit it was strange but really good. For a poem that just flowed out it was written very nicely and the words were just there and they made perfect sense. good job.

    5/5!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiffany

    It was amazing! Its much better than
    the way I use to cope with my stress,
    which was by cutting.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lisa

    I think this poem is amazing and definatly unique. Keep up the awesome poems.

  • 19 years ago

    by morbid_tears

    Hey, I really love this poem, very descriptive, my friend here said that she likes it also. Never EVER stop writing. You have beautiful writing. And I love to read it!! Keep up the good work! =-D

    ~*Amber*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Eyes_Of_Rain

    Strange? No way!! It's absolutely exquisite. I love it. The rhyming scheme is great, the flow is wonderful, and the message it sends out is awesome. I can relate to this one also, as I currently have 9 tattoos. They do help with stress, and the needles steady and deep rhythm help ease emotional turmoil and pain.

    It's cool that one day a young person who cuts, may read your words about 'helping cope without physical pain', and be touched and inspired to stop cutting, all because of this lovely piece of art you have written.

    You have a wonderful gifted mind, I hope you never lose, mis-use or abandon it. It's a very special gift, and your beautiful poems prove that you are at one with your gift, at the moment. I hope you always will be.

    Love Always,
    ~Sherry~