Interesting...
I was wondering who this amazing "He" is....
Loved it! Keep it up.
*JussxAxNobody*

Short but oh so sweet. i loved it. it was intense. nice work.
Emma 5/5

Yes it was good and I thought "He" was Jesus Christ is that what you were thinking???

Beautifully written, yet with a certain amount of mystery behind it. I liked how you got your message across without taking half a page to do it (which takes a good writer). Like any good poem, this one kind of leaves the reader with an idea of what you want to say, but free to interpret it as they wish. 5/5
As always~ Kate

Also* good choice of a title. A good title really ties a good poem together.

Intresting poem, it is great

I love this poem! I know how u feel! Excellent writing. 5/5