Failure Notice

I was really well written lol, I meant it was really well written, which it was :D

Wow man thats really sad, sorta explains all your other poems tho :D
I can relate to the drugs part, many friends pushed me away and I know how much that hurts x'(
The flow in this was right on and I was really well written.

Keep it up and hold on, from reading your stuff I can see your hurt, alot x'(

your a great poet, so keep writing :D

x)

Thats an amazing poem. I can relate to it really well .. I just wanted to say this poem left me speechless.
Jess xox

That's so sad... I had a friend like that (the subject of my poem: "My Pretty Stoner"). I'm sorry she didn't listen to you. But don't give up on her - keep talking to her. Maybe she'll see how much you care and she'll get help for her problems. If you need help, visit this website:www.recoveryconnection.org
I hope everything turns out okay.

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i really liked this one.... i felt i was almost there with you as you tried and failed to keep this person from destroyin themselves. if u look at the third line of the second paragraph tho there is what i think must be a misspelling......should it not be caused??
mandie