My sweet sweet Amanda, This poem makes so much sense to me and it breaks my heart to hear you so depressed.....Talk to me please!!! You know I'm always here for you, no matter what hun!!! Why are you so depressed??? I understand your pain....SMILE for me, tomorrow is a brighter day!!!

*I'll be there, I love you girl*

So beautifully written and yet so sad! It makes all the sense in the world. It reminds me of a poem I wrote when I was feeling down Score of Tears. If you ever need to talk you know you have a friend in me. Another poem filled with emotion! Take Care! Brooke~

This was said but werey good the lins went well with eachother your reallly good and keep up the good work

Another amazing piece Amanda. It flowed great and so naturally! Keep it up. once again 5/5

Much Love
~*hAiLy*~