Sorry

by fallen angel   Aug 15, 2005


I’m sorry I ever caused you pain,
Please believe I did not gain.
I still miss your love,
Sweet and tender too.

Please don’t leave me standing here,
Outside in the rain.
When I ended it with you,
I knew you would pull through.

Why cant we still be friends?
We’ll give the rules a little bend.
I’m sorry I ever caused you pain,
But please just don’t leave again.

    report violation
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  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Aww that was touching...I could tell it came straight from your heart. Excellent poem

  • 19 years ago

    by ღ*KiM*ღ

    The 3rd stanza seemed a little out of pace as it did not match the other two's technique. Overall I thought it was pretty good, 3.5/5. Unfortunately I can't vote ½s :S Kim x

  • 19 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Great poem! it flowed nicely, i can see why its got a 5 as its average rating, great job! 5/5!!

  • 19 years ago

    by crystal

    i really like your poem. great job.
    crystal

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