Loves great loss

by fallen angel   Aug 15, 2005


I would never cheat on you,
Or hurt you just the same.
I know how it feels to lose a love,
Suffocated like there's no end!

I could never hurt you,
The pain is much too great.
Could you ever hurt me?
I really need to know.

Could you ever hurt me?
Coz I know I hurt you so.
If I ever hurt you just tell me,
Then away I’ll go.

If I ever lost you, what would I do?
I would die after I’d cried your name,
Your precious name, one last time.
Our love ending and dying with our soles
Is loves one true, and great loss.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ღ*KiM*ღ

    I thought it was good, but it does not flow as well as others. The last stanza doesn't seem to fit in with the rest. Overall I would say 4/5 :) Keep it up.

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