A promised love

by Eddie   Aug 15, 2005


Manny nights i sit up and i think of you.
just praying to god that our love is true.
just thinking about when we first met.
all the way too our first kiss.
i know at times you torn my heart apart.
but we past the hard part.
at night when we argue i don't know what too do.
i feel like every thing would be better if i said that i love you.
other times i break down and cry.
i just cant stand too hear our selfs fight.
that night when you told me you don't love me any more.
my knees got so week they couldn't support me when they hit the floor.
but now were back together in the same chapter as we were before.
and now that i feel that you don't love me any more.

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  • 19 years ago

    by April G

    hey great poem i like it a lot. I knwo exactly how you felt! lol ... stupid relationships, you love them but then you don't. keeo writing

    ~April~

  • 19 years ago

    by Vivian

    That is a real good poem that you wrote, Everyone who is in a relationship can prolly relate to this. Even though I can't becuz I am not in one, I can relate to you, believe it or not. Great poem keep it up, Check mine out sometime
    ~DarkPoet78~