Comments : The story of a young girl

  • 19 years ago

    by Joey P

    Very well written, and Im afraid also cause im a cutter and Im afraid i mite go too deep.

    God Bless

  • 19 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    very effective with the repitition 5/5!!

  • 19 years ago

    by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist

    thanks fro all my comments it means a lot... 5/5 for you and once again thanks, it meansa lot to me ...

    -sabrina

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    You are right cutting isnt worth anything...Great poem I love the repetition and the ideas put across, stay strong, one day everything will be ok...
    xxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Lithium

    i like the way you wrote this and the message your sending it great work!