Awsome! i loved it!

Great poem(or is it a song?), its one of very few that has not much rhyming but can still flow great..it was a enjoyed read.

it was easy to read and i loved the end :D

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I like how you created this poem. With the repetition of statement and question at the end of each stanza. It helps to emphasise your point. Very nice.
-A

You're poems are so very interesting, and they require one to read them several times before they can truly appreciate the work gone into writing it, ang the expression behind the poem. It wasn't until the third time that I read it, that I truly appreciated the poem, and realized just how wonderful it really is. Great job, I will look forward to more poems from you. Keep me posted on new ones!!

Kalika

its not as good as some of your other poems ive read, but i still loved it. it was great work. you have an amazing talent. xx

Nice job friend keep it up 5/5

This one was brilliant. keep it up.

Wow, great poem! i loved it. it had a great flow and i really liked the begining. great job.
crystal
-and thanks for the advice on my poem. i made the changes and it does work alot better