Nice work...shows what happens when the one you want is with someone else and you start doubting yourself and wondering why it couldn't be you, and how it could be different and what's going through his mind...

"what am i missing?
I'm just as good as her.
I wish i had what she has..
What does she got?
I'm unsure."

Might sound better as "What does she have? I am not sure." Sometimes it is better to write out the contractions...anyway, good work.

xxx

Wow! i really liked your poem, it's so touching and i can relate to that feeling. keep it up! thank you for rating my poems, it means a lot to me.

Wow i can perfectly relate to it
i loved it

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