For some reason I always love the end of poems ? strange, and I loved the end :D

the flow not bad could be worked on at places but al in all you caught the idea very well.

x)good work(x

I only kinda get it, but I liked the parts I did get. LOL.

I really liked it, to me it really seemed to flow and I like the way it ends, awesome ending.

I liked it, very depressing but a great poem. 5/5

Thanks for the advise in the discussion thing.

Keep writing!

Chelsey

Very good peice, expressive and well written right the way though to the end

5/5

Hey great poem, flows very nicely and is filled with emotion...i loved it

Hey good work.. really liked this piece. Keep writing.

Don't know how many times someone can tell you how they can relate, but truly i can to this so much. i like your style on how you flow with your poems so well. i've read a couple, and they're interesting but also vague. they're good though. keep doing what you do best.

oh and cant forget, oi oi! punks unite :P
- andriana

Awsome poem! i think its so cool that you're into God, so many people wont admit that!

Catcha lata!

Andrea

I really like this. It's short, but still makes the reader want to keep reading. 5/5

Nice describtion and a nice poem. it's really scary when that momnet comes

note: if you could check my "pain" i will be happy

Nice poem

but the ending was amazing and scary

loved it

No more can i add. But shortpoem but full of emotion. Keep it up