Good poem very descriptive keep on writing!

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interesting job... wierdly good ilu

greatly written! it flowed nicely and the title didnt appeal to me but the poem was still great! 5/5!

cutting poems...

I dont quite understand the concept of this poem but somehow it managed to grab me.. wonderful even if I didn't quite get it..

This is wonderful, I love how unique it is, and I like how you base it on something you read, I think it increases the meaning of the poem. The symbalism is great, nice job, 5/5!

Love the poem great job...5/5.......your are a really good writter......oh and if you will can you please rate and comment on my poems thankz.....