Wow this was sad, well written great flow but sad x(

I liked the words chosen and the style you put it in :D

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Hey nice poem, I particularly like the line "I love you, goodbye, in a sentence the same" It seems kind of .. ironic to be in the same sentence. It also flowed nicely, nice work. 4/5.

The best thing about your style is a lot of these are short but i feel like i've read a two page poem. weird huh.

No attempts to resolve, no discussions lately
For waiting in the wings was another lady

i liked that part the most, i know im young but ive been left for another girl so i dunno if im just immature or what not but it's neat that you can handle this and you kind of seem like oh well it's too bad but now im over it, it took me like a whole month of crying and being a baby to get over it when it happened to me anways though lol you didn't need to know that, this was great tho everything in all of your poems make sense and they flow and when you rhyme you rhyme well. 5/5