Truly beautiful. I honestly hope that your words will inspire some people to live their lives to the fullest, and to not waste the gift that was given to them. You did a beautiful job of portraying that theme. Great job!

Kalika

wow...amazing!!!! when you say

"You should talk to someone about everything
They'll listen, trust me they will"

...it's not that they won't listen, it's that it's really hard to talk about the past and the pain. anyways, very inspirational poem. keep it up!!
-xXx-

Amaing poem!

You say we should talk to soem one and they will listen well for some of us no one dose and we wont just talk to anyone. i know that i sould but who do i have here that will talk back?? over all amazing poem and i love it.

(claps) nicely done, great flow. Can easily relate to this one. Keep up the great work. ^_^x

That is a great poem that everyone should read!...AMAZING!=]