wow, this is good 5/5

That's sad. I really think suicide is stupid. But they write good poems. Always full of emotion and stuff. I hope you don't take part in that nonsense. You have much to live for. Your poem is good :) 5/5

Wow! I love it! Your style is very similar to mine. It flows awsome! 6/5! keep up the talent! It rocks! You are an awsome poet. Dont stop writing!

That's a really good poem, but I hope you aren't considering suicide. Please don't take your life, it's really not the answer. Even though it may not seem like it right now, you still have so much to live for. Please just keep your head up and stay strong. Take care of yourself.
><> Kiesha

Very sad poem. I hope that you are alright, and don't worry, the sun will come out tommorow!! On the other hand, you expressed your feelings beautifully, and that is what poetry is truly about. Awesome job!

Kalika

I really like this poem I gave ita 5/5 the flow was perfect, and i wanted to read the next worf, you poems is one of the great ones on this site.

This was a good poem filled with emotion i can relate check out
some of mine and keep writting

Wow this was good.... It reminds me or myself..:D:D Anyway I loved it!! 5/5

Tori

WOW, very depressing and emotional, I relate 101 % to this one.....This is how I'm feeling every day, I know your pain!!!! Please be strong and remember that you are not alone....I'm here if you ever need to talk to some one who knows what you are going through!!! Great job...

*Hugs Sabrina*

Aw... this poem is so sad! 5/5! It was really deep!

Heyyyyyy :) Great poem! Sad but still really good! It flows really well and its very emotional. I give you a 5 :D
Take care,
Rachelxx

Oh and thanks again for all the comments you leave on my work, it gives me a reason to continue to keep posting my poetry on here :)

Suicide isnt the answer...although some of my poems disagree with that lol. but good poem and keep writing!

I thought this would be a cliche topic and it is, but you manage to make it work for your advantage.

The only thing I can critized about this poem is, shorten your lines. In ever stabza there is one that is extra long, it kinda trip over itself.

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