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by spidermike2103 Aug 16, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Ive been pushed out of my home You looked through things That were never to be shown So don't cry in front of me For the things you found You were not to see So wipe those tears From your eyes And burry the truth Deep insideThis is my first poem I've ever tried writing so if it sounds crappy I barely started writing poems.
by katie hensley
Very nice for ur first write. rhymes arent forced. 5/5 -k-
by ambika
Great for your first poem, keep it babes. i love you hun :) xxx
by ♥Madison Meeks♥
Good poem.keep up the good work.
by kate
I think it really good.Welll done youve got talnet so keep writting