Mmm i really liked this one i bit confused but thats me anyway i think this poem was great to me it's seems like every word you have a day is killing eachthing if you don't share for some odd reason. that's what i think i think also each word is connected to eachother. I dunno i'm odd but that's what i think lol. Anyway amazing job again keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.