Steve that's beautiful I love the way you write in so many different styles. Another style that I would like to try. Well done such a calming piece. Take Care! Brooke~

beautiful peice it makes me feel so peaceful just by reading your words. probably one of the best poems about nature i have read in a long time. again you did a beautiful job!

~Jacklyn

this form of poetry really intreged me. i have never read a poem like this before and for my first read, i couldnt of picked a better one..

I agree with bob ^.^ very well written, and one of the best i've read! always keep writting m'dear!

Peaceful, beautiful...I agree with all.

Another fine piece.I am amazed at how effortlessly the flow of you work is within fixed/traditional forms(mine always seem somewhat forced).This is simply a beautiful piece celebrating a wonderful day, I can really feel the images and sense of the day..Great poem, truly.