by Britney Aug 16, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I look in your eyes |
So beautiful and sad, keep writing. |
Hey! that was great! i think alot of girls could relate there! *5/5* |
Okay this one made my heart do somersaults as this is exactly wat i'm going thru. I hate being only his 'friend' tho. But good job :) |
by Carmen
I love all of your poems so much. your an awesome author |
by Jamie
I liked this poem very much adside from the third stanza i think that one needs more work but other then that its brilliatn 5/5 for sure |