by ღ*KiM*ღ Aug 16, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I'm sorry mummy please don't cry |
by ASPHYXIATED
This was really really well written and so sad!! |
by Britney
Awwl.. That poem is a heartbreaker. But I still absoluetly loved it. I can tell that you put alot of emotion into it and thats what made it so great! Great Job cannot wait to read more of your work. I would have given it a 6 xox Britney xox |
by Sean Allen
Is this a cutting/suicide poem? If it was it was beautifully rendered and disguised. The personal note to all these important people in your life was very poignant, and you managed to do it while you rhyme, good work. |
that was really good. maybe some work on some of the rymes? oh well, probably just me! |
by lostlllsoul
nicely written |