by Kendall
i reeeeally wish i could be young again too, even just for one day. things really are a lot simplier when you dont know anything. i miss being stupid lol. i liked your poem a lot, its really heartfelt. |
by JodiieBaybeh
great poem really liked it :) |
by miracle
Hi, thanks for commenting on my new poem It means a lot to me, aspecially because you were the only one that commented. I really love this poem, because when I read it I just know exactly how you feel and I feel so much emotions just by reading it. |
by Broken Tears
Thanks for commenting on my new poem. It means tons. And O.. M... G... I absolutely love your poem. It expresses me so much. I haven't lost my greatgrandad, but my granddad did die when I was 3. I don't remember him very much. But my very eariliest memory of my life involves him. I love him and miss him and wish he was still alive. People say he was a really great person. I live with my mom too. She is never there for me though. And she never was. But it's only because I hide from her, and she doesn't know how sad I am or half the stuff I do. ie; cut, smoke, that sorta thing... And she never will. She thinks too highly of me for me to ever let her find out. I love her, she just doesn't understand. Ignorence is bliss to her. But back to your poem, I love it. Very awesome job. I think I'm gunna write a short autobiography. Kinda like what yours was. I love it. Awesome job. 5/5 times a million! ROCK ON! |
by Broken Tears
Thx! I'm in the process of writing it. if i like it when i get done, i'll be sure and tell ya where to read it at! and thx again for the comments! |
Good one....it's been a while since I check out your poems...this is awesome...and there's already 8 people who commented on it...and they already said what I have to say...so yeah...this is good...and why children want to be a grown up...I think you know the answer yourself.. |
by Polly
Wow amazing! It was really heartfelt. Keep it up, and take care. I know how you are feeling. |
by lonelynow
GENIUS GENIUS GENIUS!!!!!!!!! |
by lonelynow
GENIUS GENIUS GENIUS!!!!!!!!! |
by emmajaynexo
Thanks for commenting on my work, this poem was great. |
by Kitty
That is a great poem. i dont normally read poems that are so long but that was excellent, i remember wen i was young that i wouold wish to gro up. but now i wish i was young. Lifes a Biatch. We all hate hurting ourselves but thank god poetry helps us release our emotions, |
I'm 12 and wish I was a grown up because then people might take my more seriously, you know, treat me like a person and not some stupid kid. I can carry an intellectual conversation but still no body cares, I'm just a kid.... Great poem!! |