very good. short and to the point. comment/vote on my poems too plz.

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gr8 poem! 5/5

thnx for comments and hmmmmm......yeh sure,that'll be £25 :P j.j

:-o BULLY! i dont even owe u dat much now!

LOL okok das tru £23 :P

Thats a very good poem! Nice flow and emotion! I feel like that sometime 2...I like the repetition that you did. it makes the poem sound really cool!