Trail and error

by Jenn   Aug 16, 2005


You talked to me
I talked to you
and on it went
until i got feelings for you
i thought you did to
but my feelings were true
as to yours were just a test
a test i obviously failed
because i didn't get the best

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  • 18 years ago

    by Erica Jovie©

    Hey jenn i was reading ur quotes and had to check out ur poems! u are very talented. it sounds like ur going through the same thing i am. DON"T LOSE HOPE! keep up the writing and i'll say a prayer for u and ur guy. and hey if u could can u plz check out my poem(s) "down on my knees" and/or "miracle smile" and PLZ COMMENT GOOD OR BAD! i think u might be able to relate from what i've read of ur writing! thanx and God bless

  • 19 years ago

    by Jackie

    I can relate.

  • 19 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    Your poems are short and to the point..I like that. Like your own way of writing. I'm gald I was added to your favorites and you enjoy my poems..comment/rate mine anytime.