by Hopeless Romantic Aug 16, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
As you drove me home on the night of the big party everyone left at half passed twelve. When we left we turned down a quiet road not knowing what will come our way.... Before we knew it we crashed. |
Ok First Off, Your Poem Sounded More Sad Than Anything, Maybe You Picked The Wrong Category, The Message Of The Poem Was Great Maybe If You Changed "12" To Twelve Maybe It Would Have Looked Better..And I Would Suggest That You Try a Diffrent Format 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |