Comments : Poem... I can't finish anyone help?

  • 19 years ago

    by Marissa Methanphetamine

    Dont really good but it myte help u...

    did u ever love me?
    did u ever care?
    and if u did....
    why are you over there?

    im in the presence of ur shadows,
    as you ignore my soul....
    i cannot escape you footsteps,
    you look right through my heart where u left a hole.

    all i could think of..... its not very good but hey its the thought that counts right?