by Freakfall
once again great job another great poem 5/5. ~luv ya~ |
I liked how you eneded each line, it was totaly brilliant!! definately a great job!! i think i'm ganna have to put ya on my favs!! grea tjob!! 5/5! |
by Justin
great poem, I loved it, 5/5 |
by delmy
wow thats a great poem the other chiks right the ending is brilliant i loved it |
by Torn
YES its worthwhile!!! |
by Razorblade
That was on of your best poems, in my opinion! Great job! |
by Knoxy
Hey..this is really good...i can think of this in my own way, really made me think more...keep on writing, it was great...5/5! hope ur alrite, keep ur head up..never give up |
Cool! |
by M MEM
Very good 5/5 |
by Jason
Another great poem, I really did feel all the emotion in it. 5/5 |
Dont give up I nearly did but its not worth it and I learnt the hard way, but because of the love of my friends I am here today and I know that I am never alone cos God is with me and he wants to see what is best for me we are his children and he doesn't want to see us all sad and upset so yeah if you want to e-mail me you can I want to help and I do care, keep your head up, |
Wow... that was really good! 5/5.. |
5/5. love it. |
So sadd, but so very good!! great job, keep the work up, and thanks so so much for the comment on my poem. |
Good poem |
by taeya
Hey, I just wanted to tell you I really enjoyed this poem it makes me think a lot bout my life cas i feel like your poem every day i think about suicide all the time so i just have to remember the people that love me and God..really good your going on my favs..keep up the good work..please comment on mine to if you would...thanks |
Good poem, you are such a good poet, you express yourself so lovely, you speak so much truth in your writing. |
AWESOME POEM !! |