The Untold Lies Part 2

by LonelyNightsHurt   Aug 17, 2005


The lines and cuts, tell your story
Only the ones of hurt, none of glory
For so many years, you stayed so strong
This wasn't your place, it was all wrong
Gods plan didn't work, he took you back home
You'll be happier there, you won't be alone
Promise me you'll look over and down
And if you do, I promise to never frown

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  • 18 years ago

    by UnderAge Dying

    This poem is great. keep up the good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by SexMeister69

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  • 19 years ago

    by HansRik

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  • 19 years ago

    by chiharu

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