really sad and touching.
you wrote it wonderfully jamie.
keep it up.
much love,
marjan

I loved this part "I’ll love you forever even though
You tried to take your life
With that cursed bloody knife."

but some other parts seemed a bit forced, A poem don't gotta rhyme to rock.

Good luck next time :D

thankx for your comment

I loved this part "I’ll love you forever even though
You tried to take your life
With that cursed bloody knife."

but some other parts seemed a bit forced, A poem don't gotta rhyme to rock.

Good luck next time :D

thankx for your comment

I loved this part "I’ll love you forever even though
You tried to take your life
With that cursed bloody knife."

but some other parts seemed a bit forced, A poem don't gotta rhyme to rock.

Good luck next time :D

thankx for your comment

I loved this part "I’ll love you forever even though
You tried to take your life
With that cursed bloody knife."

but some other parts seemed a bit forced, A poem don't gotta rhyme to rock.

Good luck next time :D

thankx for your comment

Great Poem!!!!!!!!
~lotta luv~
~britty~

That was good. and its kinda strange to me cuz right before i came to this page thingy, i was thinking of that good charlotte song "hold on" and then i saw ur poem that said hold on. how wierd. but yea. that was good.