Thta so cute...but don't you think it belongs it the love page.....its not that sad.....w/e, see you later...xox |
by fallen angel
Its a really good poem. short n sweet. it had a really good rythm. i know exactly how u feel. keep writing xxx 5/5 xxx |
by Natalie84
Wow...I really like that. Though I think you could add so much to this I do like how you stopped it. I love how it ended. It flowed beautifully and had lots of emotion...nicely done! |
by Bredada
Oh yeah! i love this poem is so true about how u love someone and is continous thats how i feel abbout my boyfriend, My one and only |
by Hans Fausto
Im starting to like your poems...especially the short ones..although they are short, they capture the perfect image in the poem...really cool..keep it up!:p |
Very nice poem!!i love it!!great work!!=) |