by Crystal Aug 17, 2005
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Please wet rain, dry my tears |
by HOLLY ARMER
I'm loving the contradictions within this. Also, using the different seasons to mirror your feelings is awesome. However, the last line didn't really coincide with the rest of the poem in my opinion. At first you were talking about yourself, then you addressed the reader at the end. But that's just my opinion! Take care~Holly |